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Showing posts with label explanation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label explanation. Show all posts

24/05/2018

Explanation Reflection - Writing

IALT: Reflect on my explanation writing.

Kia Ora. Malo. Talofa. ! And greetings. 
Today, I will be reflecting on my explanation writing. 

-What I am good at, when it comes to writing? What I can improve on? And what future goals do I have for writing? 
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When it comes to writing, I am good at thinking quickly about what each paragraph will be about. I am also good at organizing my sentences, and basing it all on one topic. 

Example: Title - How night and day happens?
Paragraph: Night and day is caused by the rotation of the Earth. When half of Earth's globe faces the Sun, we get day. At the same time, the other half of Earth is facing the darkness, which gives us night. The effect of this, gives us night and day. 
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Next time, I can improve on using the S.E.E.E structure consistently, and could also improve in connecting to the topic, and relating my knowledge to what I've read or learned. 

This would help me to use the structure constantly, and would also help me to gain more knowledge, from what I know to what I've learned. 
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In the future, 
My writing goal is to : 
1. Write more powerful words. 
2. Use sentences that doesn't have the word in it, but relates to the sentence. 
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This is the end of my writing reflection and goals.
I hope'd you enjoyed reading.



22/05/2018

How does Night & Day happen?

IALA: How night and night happens.

Kia Ora. Malo. Talofa!
This blogpost is about, how night and day happens.

Did you know that Earth is the only planet that has night and day? And also we are the only planet who have 24 hours in a day?

Day and night is caused by the Earth's rotation with the Moon and the Sun. When half of Earth's globe is facing the darkness, we get night. At the same time, the other half of Earth has day. This is because it is facing towards the sun.

Here is an example:
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While the Earth is rotating around the Sun, the moon is orbiting the Earth. Taking 365 days for the Earth to rotate around the Sun, and 24 hours for the Moon to orbit around Earth.

There are also other beliefs and old stories in how we get night and day.

Read this presentation to find out more:

27/10/2017

The Zones of Regulation! #Explanation #SEEstructure

In this explanation, I have been using the S.E.E.E structure to help me stay on track! What does S.E.E.E stand for?
Statement
Explain
Example
Effect


The Zones of Regulation!

Did you know that there is more than 4 zones of feelings that humans go through? There is several emotions that the human body has to let action of every day but the four main zones I’m going to be telling you about today is The red zone, the blue zone, the green zone and also the yellow zone. Keep reading and you’ll soon find out what I’m talking about.


RED ZONE!
The first zone of regulation is the red zone. The red zone is based on all the high tempered, over-whelming , out of control emotions. Feelings such as anger, stressed, overwhelmed and many more. An example of times where these emotions are shown is when you’re stuck in a pickle with mates or an enemy and you start randomly taking your anger out on others. Or sometimes you could be angry because you didn’t get enough rest the night before so you start to throw things and act all stressed out in front of others. The effect on this is you might hurt someone around you and maybe even yourself. A way you could act in this situation includes: I throw things around me, break them, use bad language and sometimes hurt others who are around me! And sometimes take it out on other people. There are many different way that these emotions could be controlled. You could simply take time off to clear your mind and to set your mind straight.


BLUE ZONE!
Next, we have the Blue Zone. The Blue Zone stands on the base of sadness, tiredness, boredom, sickness, and being depressed. An example of times where these emotions are shown may be when, you’re sitting in class, all bored up and doing nothing. It can also relate to you, when you’re moving slowly, Not caring about anything and being kick back all day long. The effect of this could make your muscles weak and could also cause your mind to be sleepy. And, obviously, we need our brains and muscles to be motivated for learning. How can you support yourself in this Zone? What I do, to keep and encourage my Blue zone to stay motivated includes; Cleaning. Exercising. Sports. Sleeping. Eating.

YELLOW ZONE!
We have now entered the Yellow Zone. The emotions in the Yellow Zone contains: Nervous, Silly, Excited, Jealous, scared or even surprised. An example of times you may express these feelings are when, you’ve been given a test to complete for the end of the year report. Clearly, we all want a great end of the year report! Although, a way you could probably act in this zone, is: Fiddling with things that are around you. Annoy others who are around you. Distracting others from learning time. This feeling would be nervous and also frustrated! The effect of this could cause you to worry about everything! For an example.: You might say negative words, such as: :Ooh, I won;t get this done!:.. We need to encourage our Yellow Zone, and a way to do that is, to stop worrying and think about good things.




GREEN ZONE!
The last dimension, is the Green Zone. The Green Zone involves, feeling: Happy, Calm, Content or good to go. An example or a way you act when you’re in this Zone is when, you jump around and also interacting with people around you. The effect of this is that, you’ll be able to connect easily with pairs around you.

CONCLUSION!

I have given you the 4 main zones of regulations we feel daily. You might have only two zones in one day! And you just, might have it all! Although, I hope you have enjoyed! Thank you and see you around the school! Kia pai to ra!

15/05/2017

Learning more about paragraphs!

Kia Ora, Talofa, Malo and many more greetings to you all. Today, this statement will be explained on a reflection about learn more of paragraphs! We had a practice round today because room 10 will be writing an explanation based on kindness!Although, one skill I will remember, is to balance my metaphors! This could help me stage a great level in Tuhituhi (Writing)!
Here is a photo my paragraph! Therefore, my topic was based on "Helping others out" !