......Hello.....
I write this story for you to make you feel happy about it.
I am a little kid who likes to write narratives.
Hi guys this is a story that I write and I hope you like it.
Just comment me on my blog to say how fabulous or great my story is.
that was a nice story every bobby like it thank you for let me see your work
ReplyDeletethat was a nice story every bobby like it thank you for let me see your work
ReplyDeleteI like the way how you put punctuation your work.
ReplyDeleteThis is great and I like what you did with your story, But next time you could check it for punctuation and check to make sure sentences make sence.
ReplyDeleteGreat job :D